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Title Empowering Youth Global Youth Action Fund Opens Applications to Secondary Students in 2025

The International Baccalaureate (IB) is proud to announce that the Global Youth Action Fund, an esteemed award for students aged 12-19, is now accepting applications. This initiative recognizes and supports innovative projects and ideas from young people that are making a positive impact in their communities.

As we approach a new year, it's essential to acknowledge the remarkable work being done by youth around the globe. The Global Youth Action Fund provides an opportunity for students to showcase their initiatives, share their stories, and gain recognition for their efforts.

In 2025, the award will shine a spotlight on the exceptional passion and dedication of young people who are driving positive change in their communities. This fund is more than just providing financial support; it's about fostering global citizenship, promoting collaboration, and empowering young minds to be the driving force behind positive change.

Why is the Global Youth Action Fund significant?

1. Celebrating Young Achievers The award recognizes the outstanding work of students who are making a tangible difference in their communities, inspiring a ripple effect of positive change.
2. Fostering Global Citizenship By bringing together students from diverse backgrounds, the Global Youth Action Fund promotes cultural understanding, empathy, and cooperation – essential skills for building a better world.
3. Nurturing Creativity and Innovation The award encourages young people to think outside the box, develop creative solutions, and tackle complex issues – essential skills for addressing the challenges of the 21st century.
4. Empowering Young People By providing financial support and mentorship, the Global Youth Action Fund gives students the resources they need to turn their ideas into reality.

How can you apply?

If you're a secondary student aged 12-19 with an innovative project or idea that aims to make a positive impact in your community, we invite you to apply for the Global Youth Action Fund. The application process is now open, and we look forward to receiving submissions from students around the world.

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Join us in empowering young people to make a difference! Apply for the Global Youth Action Fund today!

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