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Tencent Trials Its Own AI Reasoning Model A Step Towards More Human-Like Interactions?

As artificial intelligence (AI) becomes increasingly integral to our daily lives, technology giants are racing to develop their own AI reasoning models. The latest development in this space is Chinese tech giant Tencent's announcement that it has started trialing its own AI reasoning model, Hunyuan Thinker, after integrating DeepSeek into some of its products.

What is Hunyuan Thinker?

Tencent's homegrown AI reasoning model, Hunyuan Thinker, is designed to provide more human-like interactions with users. With the support of two deep reasoning models, including DeepSeek, Tencent claims that question-answering will be more professional, reasoning will be more powerful, and writing will be more human. This beta testing rollout aims to make responses more intelligent and engaging.

The Rise of DeepSeek

DeepSeek, a Chinese AI startup, made global headlines last month when it unveiled its R1 chatbot that can seemingly match American competitors at a fraction of the cost. Since then, several major Chinese companies have said they will integrate DeepSeek's technology into their products. This includes tech giant Tencent, which has started exploring the integration of DeepSeek into multiple products.

Tencent's Ambition in AI

As one of China's largest online gaming and messaging apps providers, Tencent is seeking to capture a larger share of the burgeoning AI market in China. With over a billion monthly active users on its popular social media platform WeChat, the company is looking to transform content creators by 2025.

Competition Intensifies in China's Internet Search Sector

The move intensifies competition in China's internet search sector after tech titan Baidu said it would weave DeepSeek into its market-leading search engine to enrich a more diversified search experience. Chinese electric-vehicle giant BYD has also announced plans to integrate DeepSeek's software into its cars, following other domestic automakers like Geely, Great Wall Motors, and Leapmotor.

Data Handling Concerns

Despite its rise to prominence at home, DeepSeek has drawn scrutiny in some countries over its collection and handling of users' personal data. South Korea became the latest jurisdiction to remove the chatbot from app stores on Monday pending a security review, following similar moves in Italy, Taiwan, Australia, and some US states.

Conclusion

Tencent's decision to trial its own AI reasoning model marks an important milestone in the development of AI in China. As the tech giant continues to explore new ways to integrate DeepSeek into its products, it remains to be seen how this will impact the competitive landscape in China's internet search sector. One thing is certain, however – the potential for more human-like interactions and human responses are set to transform the way we interact with technology.

Transforming Content Creators in 2025

In our next blog post, we'll be exploring how AI will revolutionize content creators by 2025. From personalized recommendations to automated storytelling, we'll delve into the ways in which AI is poised to change the content creation landscape. Stay tuned for more insights and analysis on this topic!

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