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Trump Vows to Work with Congress on Education Department Reform A Shift from Abolition?

The United States education sector is bracing for significant changes as President Donald Trump has announced his intention to work with Congress to reform the Department of Education. This sudden shift in direction follows multiple reports suggesting that Trump was drafting executive orders to abolish the department entirely.

Established in 1980, the Department of Education currently employs around 4,400 people and has an annual budget of $79 billion. Its primary responsibilities include managing federal loans for college and university students, collecting data on student progress, and implementing anti-discrimination protections.

Trump's change in direction is likely driven by the fact that he cannot abolish the department without Congressional approval, which seems unlikely. Instead, he plans to use executive orders to effectively dismantle it from within. When asked about his approach, Trump stated, I think I'd work with Congress.

The Ramifications of Trump's Vow

Trump's vow to work with Congress on education department reform has sent shockwaves through the educational community. The National Education Association (NEA), the largest labor union in the country, has condemned Trump's plans as a direct attack on our students, educators, and public schools. The NEA has vowed to resist any attempts to dismantle the Department of Education, emphasizing that Congress must reject this extremist agenda.

The Role of States

In the United States, education infrastructure is primarily the responsibility of state and local governments. This has led some to speculate that Trump's ultimate goal is to return decision-making power on education matters to the states.

Teacher Unions and Trump

Trump has also indicated his willingness to work with teacher unions, stating, I think I'd have to work with the teachers union because the teachers union is the only one that's opposed to it. This move could be seen as an attempt to appease some of Trump's critics in the educational community.

The Way Forward

As the debate surrounding the Department of Education continues, one thing is clear – the future of education in the United States hangs in the balance. Will Congress ultimately approve or reject Trump's plans? Only time will tell.

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