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SEC Registrations Reach New Heights 52,304 Firms Registered in 2024

As we embark on a new year, it's exciting to report that the Securities and Exchange Commission (SEC) has achieved an all-time high of 52,304 company registrations in 2024. This represents a notable six percent increase from the previous year's total of 49,506.

The surge in registrations is a testament to the SEC's efforts to simplify and streamline the registration process, making it easier for entrepreneurs and companies to legitimize their operations with the Commission. According to Chairman Emilio Aquino, the success can be attributed to digital platforms that have modernized the registration process, allowing businesses to register more efficiently.

Breaking Down the Numbers A Closer Look

A breakdown of the record-breaking number reveals

Stock Corporations The majority of newly registered firms (75 percent or 39,146) were stock corporations.
Non-Stock Companies Non-stock companies accounted for 21 percent (10,782) of the total new registrations.
Partnerships Partnerships made up five percent (2,376) of the total new registrations.
One-Person Corporations One-person corporations saw a significant increase of 27 percent to 8,640.
Regional Breakdown Metro Manila accounted for nearly 40 percent (20,231) of new registrations, followed by Calabarzon (8,226), Central Luzon (6,141), and other regions.

Sector Insights Driving Growth

The services sector dominated the registration landscape, with around 86 percent (44,872) of all new registrants. The wholesale and retail trade, as well as repair of motor vehicles and motorcycles, saw a significant influx of 12,479 new registrants.

This growth can be attributed to entrepreneurs recognizing the value of registering their businesses with the SEC. By doing so, they gain access to resources, support, and opportunities for growth.

Looking Ahead A New Frontier

As we move into 2025, it will be crucial to build upon the success of our digital transformation journey. Chairman Aquino has expressed plans to explore new strategies that will bring the Commission's services closer to the public, further improving ease of doing business in the Philippines.

In this new frontier, we can expect to see innovative solutions and tools emerge, empowering entrepreneurs and professionals alike to navigate the ever-changing landscape of finance and commerce.

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Edward Lance Arellano Lorilla

CEO / Co-Founder

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