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Electricity Maintenance Work Areas in Metro Manila, Laguna, and Cavite Affected

As we navigate our daily lives, it's essential to stay informed about any potential disruptions that may affect us. In this case, some areas in Metro Manila, Laguna, and Cavite will experience power interruptions due to maintenance work.

Metro Manila
Beginning February 10, a portion of Culiat in Quezon City will undergo scheduled maintenance work, resulting in temporary power outages between 1000 a.m. and 300 p.m. The affected areas include

A section of Pura Villanueva Kalaw Street from Teodoro M. Kalaw Street to and including Tyrone, Teddy III, Maria Eva, Salvi, and Maria Manguiat Streets in Tierra Pura Subdivision, Culiat.

On February 11, some areas of Greater Lagro, Quezon City will also experience power outages between 1000 a.m. and 300 p.m. due to the upgrading, installation, and replacement of electricity facilities. The affected areas include

A section of Misa De Gallo Street from near Pantomina Mayor Street to and including La Mesa Heights Subdivision; and Ascension, Tatlong Hari, Rondalla, Justica, and Rosa Mystica Streets in Greater Lagro.

Laguna
Several parts of Calamba, San Pedro, Majayjay, Nagcarlan, Liliw, Magdalena, and Sta. Cruz will experience temporary power outages on certain days of the week due to ongoing maintenance work. This includes

Relocation of electricity facilities
Line reconstruction work
Installation of poles, replacement, and installation of facilities
Line reconductoring work
Preventive maintenance inside the Meralco-Botocan substation

Cavite
Between February 15 to 16, some areas in Dasmarinas City, Gen. Trias City, and Imus City will experience power outages between 1100 p.m. on February 15 and 1159 p.m. on February 16 due to maintenance work inside the Meralco – Abubot substation.

Important Dates

February 10 Culiat area in Quezon City (1000 a.m. - 300 p.m.)
February 11 Greater Lagro, Quezon City (1000 a.m. - 300 p.m.)
February 13 Balara and Batasan areas (900 a.m. - 1230 p.m.)
February 11-12 Fort Bonifacio, Taguig (1130 p.m. - 1159 p.m. and 400 a.m. - 430 a.m.)
February 15-16 Cavite areas in Dasmarinas City, Gen. Trias City, and Imus City (1100 p.m. - 1159 p.m.)

Conclusion
While these power outages may cause some inconvenience, it's essential to prioritize the reliability and efficiency of our electricity systems. By staying informed about these scheduled maintenance work, we can better prepare for any potential disruptions.

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