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Title Rubio and Netanyahu Discuss Gaza Ceasefire 5 Key Insights to Watch

As US Secretary of State Marco Rubio embarks on his Middle East tour in Jerusalem, he will meet with Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu to discuss the fragile Gaza ceasefire. Here are five key insights to watch as they navigate the complex negotiations

1. Trump's Proposal Under Scrutiny Rubio is expected to push forward President Donald Trump's proposal to take control of Gaza and relocate its 2 million residents. While foreign leaders have largely rejected this idea, Netanyahu has expressed openness to it.

2. Alternative Proposals on the Horizon Diplomatic sources indicate that Egypt is leading efforts to propose an alternative plan within weeks, focusing on training a new security force and appointing local Palestinian leaders. This could be a game-changer in the region.

3. Hamas' Role Remains Unclear Rubio has stated that he believes Arab states are working in good faith, but emphasizes that Hamas must have no future role. This remains a sticking point in negotiations, as Hamas is still committed to its goals despite releasing hostages and prisoners.

4. Gaza's Devastating Reality The latest hostage-prisoner exchange highlights the devastating impact of war on Gaza. Ibrahim, a freed prisoner, described his shock at seeing Gaza's destruction, which has left millions displaced and struggling to rebuild.

5. Next Steps Uncertain The second phase of negotiations is expected to begin next week in Doha, but it remains unclear what concessions both sides will make. Washington has said it is open to alternative proposals from Arab governments, but for now, the only plan is Trump's.

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