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The Philippines' Mixed Curling Team Pulls Off Stunning Upset Over South Korea at Asian Winter Games

In a thrilling match at the Pingfang Curling Arena, the Philippines' unranked mixed curling team, comprising Marc Pfister and Kathleen Dubberstein, surprised everyone by defeating South Korea, ranked 13th in the world and top-seeded in Asia. This unexpected win is a significant morale booster for Team Philippines ahead of the opening ceremony on Friday.

The Underdog Story Takes Center Stage

As the underdogs in this competition, the Filipino curlers proved that they are not to be underestimated. According to Curling Pilipinas secretary-general Jarryd Bello, We are definitely the underdog team here, but our athletes are here to compete and they are proud to represent the country. With this win, the Filipinos have set their sights on securing a medal in the mixed doubles event.

The Secret to Success Focus and Teamwork

So, how did the Philippines pull off this stunning upset? According to Marc Pfister, it was all about staying focused and playing as a team. We tried not to get too nervous or emotional, he said. We stuck to our game plan and communicated well with each other. Kathleen Dubberstein added that their experience in international competitions helped them stay calm under pressure.

The Canard Effect A Boost for the Filipinos

In curling, the canard effect refers to the phenomenon where a team's chances of winning increase when they're playing as an underdog. It seems that the Philippines has caught this canard bug, and it's working wonders for their game! We've been underestimated before, said Dubberstein, but we always come out on top.

Looking Ahead Building Momentum

With this win, the Philippines is now looking to build momentum and make a strong case for a medal. Pfister and Dubberstein will take on Kyrgyzstan later today and Qatar tomorrow, with the aim of securing more wins in the round-robin stage.

Conclusion

In conclusion, the PH mixed curling team's stunning upset victory over South Korea is a testament to their determination, teamwork, and canard effect. As they continue their journey at the Asian Winter Games, we can't help but be excited about what the future holds for this talented team. Will they make it all the way to the medal stage? Only time will tell!

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