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Asteroid Alert Why Asteroid 2024 YR4 is Unlikely to Hit Earth in 2032

As astronomers continue to track the trajectory of asteroid 2024 YR4, concerns about a potential impact on Earth have risen slightly. However, experts remain confident that the chances of collision are extremely low.

The Odds of Impact

Recent calculations suggest that there is only a 2% chance of asteroid 2024 YR4 striking our planet in 2032. This means that there is a reassuring 98% probability that it will safely pass Earth without incident. As scientists continue to monitor the asteroid's path, the odds of impact are likely to fluctuate and eventually drop to zero.

Understanding Asteroids

But what exactly is an asteroid? Simply put, asteroids are small rocky bodies that orbit the sun, often found in the main asteroid belt between Mars and Jupiter. Scientists believe these space rocks are remnants from the solar system's formation over 4.6 billion years ago.

Tracking Potentially Hazardous Asteroids

Asteroid 2024 YR4 was discovered in December by a telescope in Chile. Estimated to be between 130 feet and 300 feet across, NASA's Webb Space Telescope will observe it in March before it disappears from view. Once the asteroid passes out of sight, scientists will have to wait until 2028 when it passes our way again.

The Scientific Process

Larry Denneau, senior software engineer with the University of Hawaii's asteroid impact alert system, reassures us that experts are following a rigorous process to track the asteroid's path. Don't panic, he says. Let the process play out, and we'll have a for-sure answer.

No Cause for Concern

Experts emphasize that there is no need to worry about asteroid 2024 YR4. NASA's Paul Chodas, director of the Center for Near-Earth Object Studies, notes To be clear, we expect the impact probability to drop to zero at some point. Once the Webb Space Telescope pinpoints the asteroid's size and orbit, NASA can accurately predict its potential impacts.

Conclusion

While there is a slight chance that 2024 YR4 may strike Earth in 2032, experts are confident that the odds will continue to fluctuate and eventually drop to zero. As NASA has demonstrated with its Dart spacecraft, deflecting asteroids is possible. For now, we can rest easy knowing that scientists are keeping track of this potentially worrisome asteroid.

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