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5 Key Insights on Malabon's New Emergency Alert App Revolutionizing Crisis Response

As cities around the world face the increasing threat of natural disasters and emergencies, innovative solutions are crucial in ensuring swift and effective response mechanisms. Recently, Malabon City launched its All Hazards One Network (AHON) 24/7 Alert Application, a groundbreaking mobile app designed to revolutionize crisis response and communication between residents and local authorities. In this blog post, we'll delve into the key insights of this new emergency alert system.

Insight #1 Enhanced Coordination and Communication

The AHON 24/7 Alert Application significantly improves coordination and communication between Malabon City government and its residents during calamities and emergencies. With real-time access to essential city services, including medical emergencies, safety and security, fire response, traffic enforcement, engineering, and waste management, the app ensures seamless information exchange.

Insight #2 Simplified Registration Process

To ensure seamless integration with the existing system, users must register by submitting a photo of themselves along with valid identification (ID) and providing personal and contact information. This streamlined process enables the city to verify requests and respond promptly, unlike its predecessor, the TXT MJS.

Insight #3 Increased Transparency and Accountability

The AHON 24/7 Alert Application offers increased transparency and accountability through its dashboards, which allow the City Command and Control Center, along with city departments, to easily monitor requests and reports sent by residents. This enables immediate response, unlike the old version where operators had to create a report before taking action.

Insight #4 Empowering Residents

The AHON 24/7 Alert Application empowers residents by providing them with direct access to critical information and services. With features like emergency hotline numbers, city ordinances, police watchlist, traffic and weather updates, residents can stay informed and prepared.

Insight #5 Evolutionary Leap

The AHON 24/7 Alert Application marks a significant evolutionary leap from its predecessor, the TXT MJS. Since its launch in February 2023, the app has shown impressive results, with the city government resolving an astonishing 96.9% of the 15,332 reports received.

In conclusion, Malabon City's AHON 24/7 Alert Application is a game-changer in crisis response and communication. By streamlining registration, enhancing transparency, empowering residents, and marking an evolutionary leap from its predecessor, this app sets a new standard for emergency alert systems worldwide. As cities continue to evolve and adapt to the challenges of the modern era, innovative solutions like AHON 24/7 Alert Application will play a vital role in ensuring public safety and well-being.

What's Next?

As we look ahead to the future of crisis response and communication, it's crucial that we leverage innovative technologies like the AHON 24/7 Alert Application to address the pressing challenges facing our planet. By harnessing the power of collaboration, creativity, and cutting-edge tools, we can create a better tomorrow for all.

Unlock the Power of Crisis Response

In the face of uncertainty, Malabon City's AHON 24/7 Alert Application is a beacon of hope and resilience. As we navigate the complexities of crisis response, let us remember that innovation is key to unlocking the power of effective communication and coordination.

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Edward Lance Arellano Lorilla

CEO / Co-Founder

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