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UK Immigration Cracks Down on Illegal Foreign Workers A Crackdown on Undocumented Migration

The UK's immigration enforcement teams have made a significant surge in arresting illegal foreign workers, with over 600 arrests in January alone, marking a 73% increase compared to the same period last year. This effort is part of the new Labour government's plan to tackle undocumented migration and people smuggling gangs.

In this blog post, we will explore the role of UK immigration in cracking down on illegal foreign workers and how it aims to reduce both legal and undocumented migration to address growing concerns about border security and irregular migration.

The Crackdown

According to government officials, the 609 arrests were made during visits to over 800 premises, including nail bars, restaurants, car washes, and convenience stores. This significant increase from the 352 arrests made in January 2024 underscores the urgency of addressing undocumented migration.

The Labour government's plan includes boosting enforcement to record levels, alongside tough new legislation to disrupt criminal gangs that undermine border security. Home Secretary Yvette Cooper emphasized the need for stricter measures to prevent exploitation of illegal migrants and reduce irregular migration.

Why the Crackdown?

Undocumented migration by individuals taking perilous journeys across the English Channel from northern France to southern England was a major issue during last July's general election, which brought Starmer's Labour Party to power. The government aims to reduce both legal and undocumented migration to address growing support for anti-immigration parties like Nigel Farage's Reform UK.

Regular migration is currently running at historically high levels, estimated at 728,000 for the year to June 2024. To curb this trend, the government has established a new Border Security Command and strengthened cooperation with European partners, including Europol.

The Importance of Addressing Undocumented Migration

Addressing irregular migration is crucial to maintaining border security. The UK's immigration enforcement teams are playing a critical role in this effort by cracking down on illegal foreign workers.

Conclusion

The UK's immigration enforcement teams have made significant strides in cracking down on illegal foreign workers, with over 600 arrests in January alone. This effort is part of the Labour government's plan to reduce undocumented migration and people smuggling gangs. By boosting enforcement to record levels and introducing tough new legislation, the government aims to address growing concerns about border security and irregular migration.

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