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Title Bangladesh Grapples with Unrest and Arrests Amid Political Turmoil Warning from Powerful Party

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The Bangladeshi government, led by interim leader Muhammad Yunus, has been issued a stern warning by the Bangladesh National Party (BNP) against further arrests and violence amidst ongoing political unrest. The warning comes as police have apprehended over 1,500 individuals nationwide in recent days, raising concerns about human rights abuses.

The BNP's secretary-general, Mirza Fakhrul Islam Alamgir, publicly expressed his party's concerns to Yunus on Monday night, marking the first time the BNP has spoken out against the interim government. The warning is a significant development in the escalating political crisis that began when protesters targeted buildings connected to ousted Premier Sheikh Hasina.

The unrest escalated when police stood by as protesters torched the building, which had been turned into a museum, sparking fears of human rights abuses. The protests were sparked by reports that 77-year-old Hasina would appear in a live broadcast from exile in neighboring India, prompting clashes between anti-Hasina protesters and members of her Awami League party.

The Students Against Discrimination protest group, which played a key role in the uprising against Hasina, was attacked on Friday in the Dhaka district of Gazipur. The group has since joined the Cabinet and is demanding action, leading to mass arrests countrywide.

Human Rights Watch has cautioned that police have returned to abusive practices characteristic of the previous government, while Yunus has emphasized the importance of protecting innocent civilians and avoiding a cycle of violence. As tensions continue to escalate in Bangladesh, it remains unclear whether the country can find a path towards stability and peace.

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