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Soaring Skies 5 Key Insights on Airbus and Boeing's Eye on India's Booming Aviation Market

As the Indian aviation industry experiences unprecedented growth, two global giants, Airbus and Boeing, are positioning themselves for dominance at the prestigious Aero India exhibition. With a forecasted rise of over 7 percent per year until 2043, it is no surprise that these manufacturers are eager to tap into this lucrative opportunity.

Insight #1 India's Rising Star in Global Aerospace

Airbus' Remi Maillard accurately describes India as the rising star of global aerospace, highlighting its status as the fastest-growing commercial aviation market worldwide. With a projected 20-year growth rate of 7 percent, India's civil aviation ministry boasts of soaring skies – and for good reason.

Insight #2 Low Per Capita Air Travel Presents Opportunities

Despite impressive growth rates, per capita air travel in India remains relatively low at just 0.12, compared to 0.46 in China. This presents a significant opportunity for Airbus and Boeing to increase market share as Indian consumers become more inclined to take to the skies.

Insight #3 Railways Remain Dominant, but Air Travel is Poised for Growth

While railways remain the primary mode of transportation for many Indians, traveling by train can be slow and chaotic. With the air sector poised for growth, even a small percentage of rail users switching to flying could lead to significant increases in demand.

Insight #4 International Flights Represent the Next Leap Forward

Airbus' Maillard predicts that international flights will represent the next leap forward in India's airline sector. Boeing also forecasts that 15 percent of India's total fleet will comprise long-haul aircraft within the next 20 years, highlighting the opportunity for both manufacturers.

Insight #5 The Indian Market is a Rich Tapestry of Opportunities

The Indian market presents a rich tapestry of opportunities for Airbus and Boeing. With over 2,835 new aircraft forecasted to be needed by 2043, these manufacturers must navigate the complexities of the market while catering to India's unique needs.

As the Indian aviation industry continues to evolve, it is clear that Airbus and Boeing are well-positioned to capitalize on this growth. By leveraging their expertise and experience, they can help shape the future of Indian aviation – and reap the rewards that come with it.

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