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Title A Glimpse into Alyansa's Legislative Agenda A Senate Bid to Watch

As the 2025 Philippine election season heats up, senatorial candidates from Alyansa Para sa Bagong Pilipinas are making their mark with their proposed legislative agenda. In a recent press briefing, administration-backed bets outlined several key measures they intend to file if they win Senate seats in May.

At the forefront of their proposals is a bill aiming to strip government officials and employees of bank secrecy protection. Former Senator Panfilo Lacson emphasized the importance of transparency in government transactions, citing the need to expose potential ill-gotten wealth by allowing authorities to flag suspicious transactions early. This move is seen as a crucial step towards curbing corruption in government ranks.

Other notable proposed bills include

Restricting fake news and institutionalizing a 14th month pay for all employees (Tito Sotto)
Tax exemption for the 13th month pay, with an option to add a 14th month incentive (Abby Binay)
Amendments to the Local Government Code of 1991 to support local government units in building schools and hospitals (Benhur Abalos)
Removing the 12 percent value-added tax on electricity and internet services to ease financial burdens on Filipino households and businesses (Francis Tolentino)
Boosting micro, small, and medium enterprises to generate jobs (Manny Pacquiao)
Strengthening industries that generate jobs like construction, infrastructure, and tourism (Camille Villar)
Mandating PhilHealth to pay 50 percent of every hospital bill and providing sustainable livelihood programs (Erwin Tulfo)

In a separate discussion, the Alyansa senatorial candidates also shared their views on asserting sovereignty over the West Philippine Sea. Majority Leader Francis Tolentino emphasized the importance of a multilateral approach in addressing territorial disputes.

We are united with the view of President Marcos that the approach should be multilateral, not just Philippines and China, he said. Sotto echoed Tolentino's sentiments, expressing satisfaction that his proposal was enacted into law during the 19th Congress. Abalos emphasized the need for a multilateral approach, while Tulfo stressed the importance of fighting for Philippine sovereignty over the West Philippine Sea.

As we look to the future, it's refreshing to see senatorial candidates outlining their legislative agendas and emphasizing key issues like transparency, job creation, and national pride. Their efforts offer a glimpse into what lies ahead for our nation.

Key Takeaways

Alyansa senatorial candidates outline proposed legislative agenda
Stripping government officials and employees of bank secrecy protection is among top bills
Other proposed bills include restrictions on fake news, tax exemptions, and job creation initiatives
Senatorial candidates share views on asserting sovereignty over the West Philippine Sea

Keywords Alyansa Para sa Bagong Pilipinas, Senate race, legislative agenda, transparency, corruption, job creation, West Philippine Sea.

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