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Hawaii The Rainbow Capital of the World

As we marvel at the breathtaking beauty of a rainbow, it's impossible not to feel a sense of wonder and awe. And nowhere is this more true than in Hawaii, where the unique combination of sunshine, short rain showers, and clean air creates some of the planet's most favorable conditions for viewing these natural wonders.

In fact, University of Hawaii professor Steven Businger has dubbed Hawaii the rainbow capital of the world, a title that's well-deserved given the state's regular sunshine and frequent rain showers. When rainbows do appear, they're a sight to behold – often seeming larger and higher in the sky during the early morning and late afternoon hours, and frequently accompanied by a sense of magic and wonder.

However, Hawaii's love affair with rainbows goes beyond just their frequency or beauty. In Native Hawaiian culture, rainbows are considered a symbol of divine or supernatural power, representing Kāne, one of the four main gods in Hawaiian tradition. According to Sam 'Ohu Gon III, senior scientist and cultural adviser at The Nature Conservancy in Hawaii, traditional Hawaiians believed that the closer you got to a rainbow, the more likely you were to encounter a supernatural force or a powerful chief.

Today, rainbows are an integral part of island life, featuring prominently on everything from buildings and restaurant facades to athletic uniforms. In fact, the University of Hawaii's men's athletic teams are called the Rainbow Warriors, and the women's teams are called the Rainbow Wahine – with the nickname The 'Bows being a beloved part of Hawaiian sports culture.

As we look to the future, will climate change affect Hawaii's rainbows? According to environmental studies professor Kimberly Carlson from New York University, the answer is yes. Her team's analysis predicts that certain regions, such as Brazil, the Mediterranean, and parts of Central Africa, will experience fewer rainbows by 2100. Conversely, areas that currently receive heavy snowfall but will transition to more rainfall in the future are likely to see an increase in rainbows.

In Hawaii, scientists anticipate that rainbows will continue to be plentiful, but they may become less frequent on the arid, leeward sides of the islands – particularly Maui and the Big Island – due to longer dry spells.

Despite these predictions, there's no denying the enduring allure of rainbows. As Steven Businger notes, Rainbows are a cultural touchstone for us. They cause us to stand still and forget about the past and the future. We're really in the moment when we see a spectacular rainbow, and that's a rare experience in our busy lives.

So the next time you find yourself gazing out at a stunning Hawaiian sunset, take a moment to appreciate the beauty of a rainbow – and the special place it holds in the hearts of islanders.

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