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Strategies for Thriving in 2025 A Guide for Cultural Preservationists
As cultural preservationists, we face an ever-evolving landscape that requires us to adapt and innovate. In this post, we'll explore the top strategies for excelling in our field, drawing inspiration from Pope Francis' recent critique of Trump's migrant deportations.
Key Takeaways
In reflecting on Pope Francis' words, we can distill three key takeaways that are particularly relevant to our work as cultural preservationists
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