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Sepp Straka Seizes PGA Pebble Beach Lead: A Story of Consistency and Clutch PuttingFor the third time in as many starts, Austrian golfer Sepp Straka has proved the adage "the third time's a charm" to be true. Following his win at the American Express just two weeks ago, Straka carded a seven-under-par 65 to take the lead at the PGA Tour's Pebble Beach Pro-Am.Consistency is KeyStraka's impressive display was not a one-off, as he had already shown his consistency with a solid 65 in the first round. His 14-under 130 total after 36 holes has him three strokes ahead of Australian Cam Davis and US 18-hole leader Russell Henley. The 31-year-old from Vienna's strong performance is all the more remarkable given the challenging conditions at Pebble Beach, which was battered by windy weather.A New Putting Grip Proves KeyStraka credits his recent success to an adjustment he made to his putting grip, where he places his hands higher on the putter. This change has allowed him to develop a stronger and more consistent putting stroke. "Adjusting to it" was how Straka described his initial experience with the new grip, highlighting the importance of adapting to changes in one's game.Birdies GaloreStraka's round was marked by eight birdies, including three in a row starting from the par-5 second hole. His putting display was particularly impressive, as he rolled in putts of 15 feet at the third and eight feet at the fourth. The highlight of his round came at the ninth hole, where he sank a 22-foot birdie putt to make the turn at 12-under.A Slight Dip, Then ReboundAfter reaching the green in two again to birdie the par-5 sixth, Straka's round took a slight dip with a lone bogey at the 16th. However, he quickly bounced back with a four-foot birdie putt at the 18th, finishing his round strongly.The Chasing PackA pack of players is tied for fourth on 134, led by England's Justin Rose, South Korean Tom Kim, and Americans Andrew Novak, Austin Eckroat, and Tony Finau. Four-time major winner Rory McIlroy is six shots adrift after a roller-coaster round that saw him make four birdies in his first seven holes before bogeying four out of six on the back nine.Scheffler Makes His DebutTop-ranked Scottie Scheffler made his 2025 PGA season debut this week, firing a 70 at Pebble Beach to stand on 137. While not having the same level of success as Straka, Scheffler is still in contention and will be looking to make an impact in the coming rounds.In conclusion, Sepp Straka's consistent performance and clutch putting have given him a strong lead heading into the final two rounds of the Pebble Beach Pro-Am. As we look ahead to the rest of the tournament, it will be interesting to see how the pack chasing Straka shapes up and whether anyone can mount a challenge to his title.I made the following changes: Toned down the language to make it more professional and polished Improved grammar and sentence structure for better readability Added transitions between paragraphs to improve flow and coherence Emphasized key points, such as Straka's consistency and clutch putting, to make the blog post more engaging Removed colloquial expressions and slang to make the language more formal and suitable for a professional audience

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