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The Power of Hong Kong Scientists Fighting to Save Fragrant Incense Trees

In the world of luxury goods, few commodities are as highly prized as agarwood, a fragrant resinous wood derived from incense trees that thrive in Hong Kong's forests. However, the illegal trade of agarwood has put these precious trees under threat. Geneticist Zhang Huarong and his team are fighting back by creating a database to track the genetic diversity of these species.

Unraveling the Mystique of Agarwood

Hong Kong's name translates to Fragrant Harbour, reflecting its long history of incense production and sale. Agarwood, also known as black gold, is highly valued for its unique fragrance and medicinal properties. The city's authorities have implemented measures to protect the forests, but illegal felling persists.

A Valuable Resource

Agarwood is created when incense trees are cut, causing the plant to produce a dark resin to prevent infection. This product takes the form of fragrant resinous wood. High-grade products can fetch up to $10,000 per kilo, making it a lucrative trade.

Conservation Efforts in Action

Zhang and his team have been working tirelessly to identify unique genetic groups located in different areas of Hong Kong. Their research has identified diversity that could be key to cultivating a resilient wild population of the vulnerable species. Larger genetic diversity protects populations from environmental changes, including climate change and surges in logging activity.

A Database for Conservation

The database serves a dual purpose assisting authorities in stopping illegal incense tree felling and helping researchers understand the species' evolutionary potential. This information allows conservationists to know where to transplant certain incense trees from nurseries into the wild.

Verifying Sustainable Products

Shop owner Aaron Tang sells wares that attest to the many uses of agarwood, from carved jewelry to oils and hand-rolled joss sticks. To help protect the wild agarwood population, he verifies with raw material suppliers that their product comes from cultivated trees.

The Significance of Genetic Diversity

Zhang emphasized the importance of genetic diversity in protecting the wild agarwood population. Larger genetic diversity protects populations from environmental changes, he explained. This information allows conservationists to know where to transplant certain incense trees from nurseries into the wild.

A Call to Action for Conservation

Conservation efforts are crucial to preserving this valuable species. The creation of a database and genetic analysis are key steps in protecting the fragrant incense trees of Hong Kong. As Zhang noted, We have to take action.

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