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Nxled Shines Bright Chameleons Secure Breakthrough Win in PVL AFC

In a remarkable turnaround, Nxled secured its first-ever win in the Premier Volleyball League (PVL) 2024-25 All-Filipino Conference by defeating Galeries in four sets, 25-20, 19-25, 25-14, and 25-23, at the PhilSports Arena in Pasig City.

A Turning Point

This victory marks a significant milestone for Nxled, ending a 15-game dry spell since the Reinforced Conference. The team's perseverance and adaptability were evident throughout the match, as they adjusted their strategy to counter Galeries' rotations. Italian coach Ettore Guidetti praised his team's resilience, saying, We basically prepare every [team] we face the same way, giving them the same respect. We think everyone is special in every game. We work around their every rotation. After they switched the setter, we had to adapt quickly.

Star Players Shine

Former Chery Tiggo star EJ Laure led the scoring for Nxled with 19 points, courtesy of 14 attacks and five blocks. Chiara Permentilla added 14 points, while May Luna chipped in 12 markers. Galeries relied on Jhoana Maraguinot's 14-point scoring, and Grazielle Bombita's 11-point effort.

Tied at the Top

The competition is heating up in the PVL AFC, with Nxled, Capital 1, and Galeries all tied with a 1-8 win-loss card. As Nxled celebrates its breakthrough win, they know that it's just the beginning of their journey to success in the tournament.

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