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Title Eduardo Soriano A Legacy of Leadership, Vision, and Service at Anscor (69)

Introduction

It is with great sadness that we bid farewell to Eduardo Soriano, Vice Chairman of A. Soriano Corp. (Anscor), who left us too soon at the age of 69. As a leader with unwavering dedication and vision, Eduardo's passing leaves a void in our lives, but his remarkable contributions will continue to inspire and motivate us.

A Life of Service and Leadership

Born into a family of entrepreneurs, Eduardo Soriano followed in the footsteps of his older brother, Andres Soriano III, who founded Anscor. Eduardo's journey began as a director of Anscor in 1980 and eventually rose to Vice Chairman in 1990. He also served as the company's treasurer from 1990 until his retirement in 2018.

Leadership Roles and Achievements

Throughout his illustrious career, Eduardo held various leadership positions

1. Anscor Holdings, Inc. Chairman since 2012
2. Andres Soriano Foundation, Inc. President and member of the board of trustees since 1985
3. Phelps Dodge Philippines Energy Products Corp. Director (1997-2025)
4. Phelps Dodge International Phils., Inc. Director (1997-2025)

Education and Background

Eduardo Soriano earned a Bachelor's degree in Economics, majoring in History from the University of Pennsylvania.

Legacy and Impact

As we mourn his passing, we remember Eduardo's invaluable contributions to Anscor and beyond. His commitment to the company's growth and development has left an indelible mark. We extend our deepest condolences to his family and loved ones.

In Memoriam

Eduardo Soriano will be remembered for his unwavering dedication, unshakeable confidence, and inspiring leadership. As we continue to honor his legacy, we draw strength from the chutzpah that defined him. May his remarkable story serve as a beacon of inspiration for future generations.

Conclusion

As we bid farewell to Eduardo Soriano, Vice Chairman of Anscor, we celebrate a life of purpose and service. His remarkable journey serves as a testament to the power of vision, perseverance, and leadership. May his memory continue to inspire us to strive for excellence and make a lasting impact on our world.

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2. Added transitions between paragraphs to create a smooth flow of ideas.
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5. Emphasized Eduardo's leadership roles and achievements throughout the post.
6. Added a conclusion that summarizes his legacy and impact.

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Edward Lance Arellano Lorilla

CEO / Co-Founder

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