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Modi Hopes to Rekindle Bromance with Trump

As Indian Prime Minister Narendra Modi arrives in Washington D.C. for his latest visit, he is expected to make a concerted effort to revive his friendly relationship with Donald Trump, aiming to avoid any negative trade-related actions or sanctions.

For nearly three decades, US presidents from both parties have prioritized building ties with India, recognizing the country as a natural partner against a rising China. However, Trump has also been critical of India's tariffs, previously labeling the country the biggest tariff abuser.

Ahead of his visit, Modi has taken steps to set a positive tone, including reducing duties on high-end motorcycles - a boost for Harley-Davidson, an iconic American company that has struggled in motorbike-loving India.

The Indian government has also cooperated with Trump on one of his top priorities deporting undocumented immigrants. While public attention has focused on Latin American migrants, India is the third source of undocumented immigrants in the US after Mexico and El Salvador.

Modi's Hindu-nationalist government has vowed zero tolerance for undocumented migrants from Muslim-majority Bangladesh, but has promised cooperation with Trump on this issue.

During his first term, Modi assiduously courted Trump, sharing a common goal of promoting the interests of their countries' majority communities over minorities. The two leaders share much in common, including a willingness to challenge long-held democratic norms by pursuing critics.

As Modi prepares for his visit, his advisors hope that he and Trump can recreate their bonhomie of the past and use it to ensure India avoids any negative trade-related actions or sanctions. India remains one of the few countries that enjoys bipartisan support across the aisle in the US.

The Biden administration has occasionally offered gentle critiques on Modi's record on minority rights, an issue unlikely to resonate with Trump. However, Curtis believes that India has learned a lesson from Biden's warning and that the issue is effectively closed.

Key Takeaways

Modi aims to revive his friendly relationship with Trump
India has taken steps to set a positive tone ahead of the visit
The two leaders share common goals, including promoting the interests of their countries' majority communities over minorities
India remains one of the few countries that enjoys bipartisan support across the aisle in the US

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