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United Against Trump's Gaza Plan Arab Nations Unite in Rare Display of Unity

The proposed relocation of Palestinians from Gaza to Egypt and Jordan has sparked a strong backlash across the Middle East, with Arab nations displaying unprecedented unity against US President Donald Trump's plan. As the international community weighs in on this contentious issue, it is evident that the stakes are high and the implications far-reaching.

A Unified Front

Across the region, even Washington's closest friends have recoiled at the proposal, with countries including Egypt, Jordan, Saudi Arabia, the United Arab Emirates, and Qatar rallying to block it. Ahmed Aboul Gheit, the Arab League chief, has been vocal in his opposition, stating that the prospect of Palestinian displacement from Gaza and the West Bank is unacceptable for the Arab world, which has fought this idea for 100 years.

Egypt and Jordan Take the Lead

As key US allies with decades of security cooperation with Israel, Egypt and Jordan are well-positioned to lead the charge against Trump's plan. Egyptian President Abdel Fattah al-Sisi has been adamant that his country will not participate in any forced relocation of Palestinians from Gaza, calling it an injustice. Similarly, Jordan's King Abdullah II has reiterated his country's steadfast position against the displacement of Palestinians in Gaza and the West Bank.

Saudi Arabia and the UAE Join the Effort

Even those who have drawn closer to Israel in recent years – including Saudi Arabia, which seemed close to normalizing relations before the outbreak of the Gaza war – have refused to budge. The UAE, which signed the Abraham Accords normalizing ties with Israel in 2020, has also joined the pushback, rejecting any compromise of the inalienable rights of the Palestinian people.

A Rare Display of Unity

The issue has brought the region, often plagued by geopolitical rivalries, together in a rare display of unity. Syria's interim president Ahmed al-Sharaa has called Trump's plan a very huge crime that cannot happen, while Lebanese President Joseph Aoun has rejected proposals that would lead to any type of displacement of Palestinians from their land.

A Matter of Necessity

For Egypt, the issue is not just about standing up to Trump, but also about national security. The country has warned that mass displacement from Gaza threatens its national security, and it cannot go against Trump alone. With the support of the Gulf states, however, Cairo's decision-making power on the international stage and in front of Trump is strengthened.

The Way Forward

At the end of the month, Cairo is set to host an Arab summit on the Palestinian territories, which could be followed by an emergency ministerial meeting of the Organisation for Islamic Cooperation. Ahmed Maher, an Egyptian political researcher, has stated that the Arab world's message has been clear there can be no forced relocation, and the solution is the two-state model. Any discussion beyond these two points is off the table.

Conclusion

As the international community weighs in on this contentious issue, it is evident that the stakes are high and the implications far-reaching. The united front against Trump's Gaza plan is a rare display of unity across the Middle East, with Arab nations standing together to reject any proposal that would compromise the rights and dignity of the Palestinian people.

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