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Title IAEA Chief's Fukushima Visit Japan Returns to Nuclear Power Amid Safety Concerns

The International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) chief, Rafael Grossi, visited Japan's Fukushima Daiichi plant on Wednesday, coinciding with Tokyo's approval of a new energy plan that marks a gradual return to nuclear power. This development comes as Japan is actively decommissioning the Fukushima Daiichi plant, which was severely damaged by a 2011 earthquake-triggered tsunami.

The IAEA is closely monitoring Japan's efforts to decommission the plant and ensure that any new nuclear projects are conducted safely and with public confidence. During his visit, Grossi emphasized the importance of safety in Japan's return to nuclear energy, stating, As Japan embarks on a gradual return to nuclear energy in its national energy mix, it is essential that this is done with complete safety and public confidence.

Japan had previously vowed to reduce its reliance on nuclear power as much as possible. However, the latest Strategic Energy Plan includes an intention to make renewables the country's top power source by 2040, with nuclear power accounting for approximately 20 percent of Japan's energy supply.

The return to nuclear power comes amid a process of decommissioning Fukushima Daiichi, which is expected to take decades. The most challenging aspect of this process involves removing around 880 tons of radioactive debris from the reactors. During his visit, Grossi viewed the vast interim soil storage facilities near the plant for the first time.

The IAEA chief's visit follows Japan's cabinet adoption of an energy plan that aims to increase reliance on nuclear power to meet growing demand for artificial intelligence and microchip factories. This decision has sparked concerns about safety, given Japan's history with nuclear accidents.

Conclusion

As Japan returns to nuclear power, it is crucial that the country prioritizes safety and transparency in its efforts to decommission the Fukushima Daiichi plant and implement new nuclear projects. The IAEA chief's visit underscores the importance of international cooperation and monitoring in ensuring that nuclear energy is used safely and responsibly.

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