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A Fragile Ceasefire Hamas Frees Three Israeli Hostages in Fifth Gaza Exchange

As the fragile ceasefire between Israel and Hamas continues to unfold, a fifth exchange has taken place, with three Israeli hostages being freed by Hamas militants. This development comes as negotiations are set to begin on a more permanent end to the war.

The release of Or Levy, Ohad Ben Ami, and Eli Sharabi marks a significant milestone in the ongoing conflict. The three men were seized by militants during Hamas's October 7, 2023 attack that sparked the 15-month war. According to reports, they appeared thin and pale, sparking concerns about their physical condition.

The handover was a choreographed event, with the three hostages being brought on stage in Deir el-Balah before being handed over to the International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC). The event included forced statements from the three men, in which they expressed support for finalizing the next phases of the Israel-Hamas truce.

The release comes as Israel is expected to release 183 prisoners in exchange. This development has sparked concerns about the physical condition of the hostages, with many calling for their immediate release.

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The disturbing images... serve as yet another stark and painful evidence that leaves no room for doubt – there is no time to waste for the hostages! We must get them all out, said the Hostages and Missing Families Forum campaign group. An entire nation demands to see the hostages return home. Now is the time to ensure the agreement is completed – until the very last one, it added.

Background

The conflict has seen a total of 251 hostages taken by militants, with 73 remaining in captivity. The Israeli military says that 34 of these are dead. Israel's retaliation has killed at least 47,583 people in Gaza, the majority civilians, according to the Hamas-run territory's health ministry.

Next Steps

Negotiations on the second stage of the ceasefire are set to begin on Monday, with an Israeli delegation heading to Doha for further talks. The second phase aims to secure the release of more hostages and pave the way for a permanent end to the war.

Conclusion

As the conflict continues to unfold, it is clear that the situation remains fragile. With concerns about the physical condition of the hostages and the ongoing negotiations, it is crucial that all parties work together to find a peaceful solution. Only then can we begin to rebuild and move forward.

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