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The Power of Gilas Pilipinas Leaves for Doha A Journey of Preparation and Unity

The Philippine men's national basketball team, Gilas Pilipinas, has departed Manila and will participate in the 2nd International Friendly Basketball Championship in Doha, Qatar from February 14-16, 2025. As they embark on this journey, the team faces some challenges, including a banged-up roster, but coach Tim Cone remains optimistic about their chances.

The Journey Begins

Prior to departing for Doha, Gilas Pilipinas spent two days at the Inspire Sports Academy in Calamba, Laguna, where they held training sessions to reacquaint themselves with coach Cone's system. However, the team entered the camp with a few injuries that required attention. Naturalized player Justin Brownlee played through a painful foot condition due to blisters, while Dwight Ramos reported for duty with an ankle sprain.

Challenges Ahead

The team also faces the absence of Japeth Aguilar, who will not be joining the team in Doha but is expected to join them later for their away games in the FIBA Asia Cup 2025 Qualifiers. Additionally, Kai Sotto will not be participating due to an injury.

Integration and Unity

Despite these challenges, coach Cone remains focused on integrating Filipino Cypriot big man AJ Edu and wingman Jamie Malonzo into the system. Both players are recovering from separate injuries and require time to recover and adjust to the team's dynamics.

A Unified Effort

The friendly games in Doha serve as an opportunity for Gilas Pilipinas to prepare itself for the final window of the Asia Cup against Taiwan and New Zealand, which will take place on February 23 in Auckland. The team is using this chance to come together as a unit, despite their individual challenges.

The Power of Unity

As they embark on this journey, it is clear that Gilas Pilipinas has the power to overcome any obstacle that comes their way. With a strong sense of unity and determination, they will face the friendly games head-on, ready to take on any challenge that comes their way.

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