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Malabon's AHON 24/7 Alert App Revolutionizing Emergency Response in the City

As a policy analyst professional, it is essential to stay abreast of innovative solutions that can improve emergency response systems. Malabon City has taken a significant step forward by launching its All Hazards One Network (AHON) 24/7 Alert Application, designed to enhance coordination and communication between the city government and residents during emergencies.

Addressing the Need for Efficient Emergency Response

The app is a timely response to the increasing need for efficient emergency response systems. With the rise of natural disasters and other calamities, it is crucial that cities have effective mechanisms in place to communicate with residents and provide timely assistance. Malabon's AHON 24/7 Alert Application addresses this concern by providing residents with direct access to essential city government services, including medical emergencies, safety and security, fire response, traffic enforcement, engineering, and waste management.

Key Features of the AHON App

The app offers a range of features that make it an invaluable tool for emergency response. Residents can

Contact emergency hotline numbers
View city ordinances, police watchlist, traffic, and weather updates
Register by submitting a photo of themselves along with a valid identification (ID) and providing personal and contact information

How the AHON App Works

Once downloaded on their devices, residents must register for the app. This involves submitting a photo of themselves along with a valid ID and providing personal and contact information, including phone number and email. The application will be approved within 24 hours after a verification process.

The City Command and Control Center, along with city departments, has dashboards that allow them to easily monitor requests and reports sent by residents through the app. This enables them to respond immediately, unlike the old version where the operator had to first create a report and send it to the concerned office before any action could be taken.

Demonstrating Success TXT MJS

The previous version of the app, Let's Connect, TXT MJS, has already demonstrated its effectiveness in facilitating emergency response. Since its launch in February 2023, the city government has resolved an impressive 96.9 percent of the 15,332 reports from residents sent through it and Malabon Command and Communication Center.

Conclusion

Malabon's AHON 24/7 Alert Application is a significant step forward in enhancing emergency response systems. By providing residents with direct access to essential city government services, the app has the potential to revolutionize the way cities respond to emergencies. As policy analysts professionals, it is our responsibility to stay updated on innovative solutions like AHON and explore ways to integrate them into our work.

Keywords Malabon, AHON 24/7 Alert Application, emergency response, policy analysts, innovation, communication, coordination.

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