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Title Thompson Takes Charge Davis Thompson Grabs PGA Genesis Lead

The second round of the PGA Genesis Invitational has concluded, and it's been an exhilarating day on the course! Davis Thompson has taken the lead, with Scottie Scheffler hot on his heels. Let's recap the action-packed day that saw some incredible shots and surprises.

Thompson Takes Solo Lead

Davis Thompson had a remarkable round, closing with a birdie to take the solo lead at eight-under 136. His six-under par 66 was characterized by a consistent performance throughout the day. The 25-year-old American has been on a roll lately, winning the John Deere Classic last July and looking to add another PGA title to his resume.

Scheffler Shows Signs of Improvement

Scottie Scheffler, ranked top-ranked, had a solid round despite finding only five of 14 fairways. He fired a 67 with three birdies and an eagle, finishing bogey-free. After a tough season due to his right-hand injury, Scheffler appears to be shaking off the rust.

McIlroy Makes His Move

Rory McIlroy, ranked third, is just one stroke behind Thompson after firing a 67 of his own. The Northern Irish golfer has had a great start to the season, including a win at Pebble Beach two weeks ago. He's looking to maintain his momentum this weekend.

Thompson's Rollercoaster Round

Davis Thompson's round was marked by ups and downs, but he managed to finish strong. After reeling off three birdies in a row from the 11th to the 13th, he bogeyed at 14 and 15. However, he bounced back with a birdie putt at the par-3 16th and then sealed his lead with a birdie at the 18th.

Scheffler's Highlights

Scottie Scheffler had some impressive highlights of his own. He holed out from a greenside bunker for eagle at the par-5 sixth, and later made a 20-foot birdie putt at the par-5 13th. His bogey-free round was a testament to his improved short game.

What's Next?

The tournament is far from over, but Thompson has set himself up nicely with the solo lead. Scheffler will be looking to make a comeback on Saturday, and McIlroy is just one stroke behind. The action will continue tomorrow, so stay tuned for more updates!

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