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Title VP Sara Duterte Skips PDP-Laban Kickoff Amid Impeachment Trial Looming

Philippine Vice President Sara Duterte has skipped the kickoff rally of her party, PDP-Laban, amidst an impending impeachment trial. The absence of the Vice President, whose fate hangs in the balance, sent shockwaves through the political landscape.

According to sources, Duterte is currently out of the country on a family vacation and will not be attending the rally. Instead, she endorsed the party's senatorial slate through a message read by event hosts Giselle Sanchez and Eric Nicolas.

In her recorded message, the Vice President expressed gratitude for the efforts of PDP-Laban candidates to bring about real change in the country. She urged Filipinos to vote for the party's senatorial candidates, including reelectionists Senators Ronald Bato Dela Rosa and Bong Go, actor Philip Salvador, lawyers Raul Lambino, Jesus Hinlo, and Jimmy Bondoc, Sagip Party-list Representative Rodante Marcoleta, and jailed televangelist Apollo Quiboloy.

The Vice President's absence from the rally has raised eyebrows, particularly given the impeachment trial set to take place in the Senate. Her camp confirmed that she will face trial for alleged misuse of public funds, culpable violation of the Constitution, and betrayal of public trust.

Meanwhile, PDP-Laban party chairman and former President Rodrigo Duterte was expected to lead the rally, but he has yet to arrive at the venue. The party remains united under his leadership, emphasizing its Tapang at Malasakit (courage and compassion) brand of governance.

As the political landscape continues to unfold, it is clear that VP Sara Duterte's absence from the PDP-Laban kickoff rally is a significant development in her impeachment trial. Will her fate be sealed by the outcome of the trial? Only time will tell.

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