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The Evolution of Tropical Cyclone Hits Western Australia A Category 5 Storm Brings Unprecedented Power

As Tropical Cyclone Zelia made landfall on Western Australia's minerals-rich west coast, it brought with it unprecedented wind gusts of 290 kilometers per hour, prompting emergency warnings and port closures. The slow-moving cyclone, classified as a Category 5 – the highest level – dumped intense rain and posed significant threats to flash floods and storm surges.

The Full Force of a Category Five Cyclone

The eye of the cyclone passed east of Port Hedland, one of the world's busiest iron ore ports, sparing it from the fiercest winds and greatly reducing the risk of a storm surge in that area. However, surrounding areas were not so fortunate, with residents taking shelter as the storm approached.

A Resident's Perspective This One is Still Pretty Breathtaking

Bianca Katai, a local resident, shared her experience with AFP, describing the raw power of the cyclone. Most trees toppled over, but it hasn't flooded. All the trees fell sideways, but the roads are pretty clear, she said.

The Impact on Mining Operations A Halt to Ports and Rail Transport

The Pilbara region is home to significant deposits of iron ore, copper, and gold, making it a crucial hub for mining operations. As a result, major minerals export centers Port Hedland and Port Dampier, as well as the oil and gas shipping port of Varanus Island, were cleared by Pilbara Ports in preparation for the latest storm.

Conclusion

As Tropical Cyclone Zelia continues to wreak havoc on Western Australia's west coast, it serves as a poignant reminder of the region's vulnerability to these powerful storms. As we reflect on this significant event, let us honor the resilience of those affected and acknowledge the critical role that mining operations play in powering our world.

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