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Title Marcos' Attacks on Duterte's Bets A Defense of 'Stating Facts' (60 characters)

As the Philippine senatorial election approaches, President Ferdinand Marcos Jr.'s recent criticisms of senatorial aspirants aligned with former president Rodrigo Duterte have garnered significant attention. Alyansa Para sa Bagong Pilipinas, a group comprising administration-backed senatorial candidates, has come to the defense of the President's statements, arguing that they are merely stating facts and expressing his personal opinion.

During a press conference preceding their proclamation rally in Iloilo City, former Senate president Tito Sotto emphasized that Marcos is not a candidate and therefore entitled to express his views. Representative Erwin Tulfo from ACT-CIS party-list added that Alyansa will focus on highlighting their accomplishments rather than engaging in negative campaigning.

When questioned about the President's comments, Benhur Abalos, a former interior secretary, urged voters to consider the full context of Marcos' statements. He explained that the President was simply stating facts, such as none of the administration's senatorial candidates being involved in a bloody drug war or allowing the country to become a foreign gambling site.

President Marcos himself took aim at Duterte's allies during Alyansa's proclamation rally in Laoag City on Tuesday. He noted that none of the administration's senatorial candidates have been involved in these controversial issues and that they are experienced lawmakers, local government executives, and Cabinet officials who are genuine public servants.

While some may view Marcos' attacks as an attempt to discredit his political opponents, Alyansa defends the President's right to express his opinion. In a competitive election season, it is essential for voters to consider the facts and not be swayed by mudslinging tactics.

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1. Improved sentence structure and wording for better clarity and flow.
2. Added transitional phrases to connect ideas between paragraphs.
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5. Corrected minor errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

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