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What's Behind the P3B Budget Request: The BARMM Polls Reset

As the Bangsamoro Autonomous Region in Muslim Mindanao (BARMM) parliamentary polls approach, the Commission on Elections (Comelec) has announced that it requires an additional budget of P3 billion to ensure a smooth and successful election process. However, with budgetary constraints from the national government, Comelec Chairman George Erwin Garcia has indicated that they may be able to lower this request to P2.5 billion.

Breaking Down the Budget Request

The P3 billion budget request is primarily intended to cover the costs of hiring teachers who will serve as poll watchers during the parliamentary elections. These teachers play a vital role in ensuring that the voting process is fair and transparent, making their presence essential for the integrity of the election.

Garcia noted that the draft bill proposing the postponement of the BARMM polls does not specify a particular amount for funding, but rather states that the necessary funds will be sourced from the current budget appropriation or other existing budgets. This flexibility allows Comelec to make the most of limited resources available, streamlining its efforts.

A Possible Continuation Scenario

One alternative scenario being considered is the possibility that the BARMM parliamentary polls could be integrated into the national and local elections scheduled for May. If this were the case, Comelec would not need to conduct new procurement procedures, significantly reducing costs and simplifying the process.

Garcia emphasized that this approach would be easier and cheaper than conducting a separate election, which would require additional resources and personnel. This scenario is still under consideration, but it highlights the flexibility and adaptability required in the context of election management.

The Implications for Comelec

Regardless of whether the BARMM parliamentary polls are conducted separately or as part of the national and local elections, Comelec will need to ensure that its preparations are thorough and well-coordinated. This will require significant resources and planning, making the P3 billion budget request essential.

Garcia noted that Comelec will need to focus on preparation for both the May and October elections, which means that the agency will be working simultaneously to ensure a smooth and successful electoral process.

The Role of Congress

Meanwhile, Senate President Francis Escudero has expressed hope that the House of Representatives will simply adopt the Senate version of the bill proposing the postponement of the BARMM polls. This would help streamline the legislative process and avoid further delays.

With the certification of the bill as urgent by President Ferdinand Marcos Jr., it is expected that the Senate will be able to pass its version of the bill on Monday next week.

Conclusion

The P3 billion budget request from Comelec highlights the complexity and challenges involved in conducting elections, particularly in a context like BARMM where unique circumstances require specialized planning and resources. As Comelec prepares for the parliamentary polls, it is essential that the necessary funds are made available to support this critical electoral process.

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