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Tragedy Strikes Las Cruces Three Killed, 15 Hurt in Park Shooting

Las Cruces, New Mexico, was rocked by tragedy on Friday night when a shooting at Young Park left three people dead and 15 others injured. The incident occurred during an unauthorized car show that drew around 200 people to the park.

As authorities continue their investigation into the devastating event, details are emerging about the chaos that unfolded. According to police, multiple shooters were involved in the incident, which is believed to have been sparked by an altercation between two groups of individuals.

The Scene When police and fire crews arrived at the scene around 10 pm on Friday, they found a chaotic environment with gunshot victims ranging in age from 16 to 36. Between 50 and 60 handgun casings were scattered across the park, indicating multiple shooters and weapons.

Victims The three people who lost their lives in the shooting were identified as a 16-year-old boy and two men, ages 18 and 19. Their names have not been released yet due to ongoing investigation.

Injuries A total of 15 people were injured in the crossfire, with some suffering more severe injuries than others. As of Saturday, seven victims had been taken to University Medical Center of El Paso, while four had been treated and released. The conditions of the other four individuals remained unknown.

Investigation Local police are working closely with New Mexico State Police, the Doña Ana County Sheriff's Office, the FBI, and the federal Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco, Firearms and Explosives to identify a suspect or suspects.

Community Response City Councilor Johana Bencomo expressed grief over the tragedy in an Instagram post. We need to stand strong. We need to come together, said Mayor Eric Enriquez, echoing sentiments of community unity.

Government Response Governor Michelle Lujan Grisham condemned the incident, stating that it is a stark reminder of the lack of progress on public safety measures. She vowed to continue working towards solutions to persistently high crime rates and concerns about gun violence.

In this tragic incident, we see a devastating reminder of the importance of community cohesion and the need for effective law enforcement strategies. It is crucial that authorities, community leaders, and residents work together to address the root causes of violence and restore a sense of safety in our communities.

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