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Title Honoring a Champion of Human Rights The House Holds Necrological Service for Rep. Edcel Lagman

The Philippine House of Representatives recently paid tribute to the late Representative Edcel Lagman, who passed away at the age of 82 due to cardiac arrest. A necrological service was held at the House session hall, where his remains lay in state and eulogies were delivered.

Colleagues and friends of the late lawmaker gathered to pay their respects, describing him as a man of unwavering integrity, principle, and conviction. Former Speaker Feliciano Belmonte Jr. recalled Lagman's tireless advocacy for human rights and his enduring impact on legislative history.

A Statesman of Unwavering Principle

House Speaker Martin Romualdez eulogized Lagman as a statesman in the truest sense of the word. He praised Lagman's mentorship, respect for opponents, and understanding that democracy is built on dialogue and dissent. Romualdez urged those in public service to learn from Lagman's example and strive to emulate his commitment to upholding human rights.

A Legacy of Public Service and Human Rights Advocacy

Throughout his career, Lagman served in all three branches of government as a lawyer and lawmaker. His legislative achievements include authoring landmark laws such as the Responsible Parenthood and Reproductive Health Law, Anti-Enforced or Involuntary Disappearance Act, and Human Rights Victims Reparation and Recognition Act.

Personal Reflections from Family

Tabaco Mayor Krisel Lagman, the late lawmaker's eldest daughter, thanked the House for paying tribute to her father. She shared fond memories of his wit, candor, wisdom, and eloquence, and urged those who had been touched by him to carry on his legacy of championing human rights.

Conclusion A Testament to Finesse in Leadership

Edcel Lagman's life and work serve as a powerful testament to the importance of finesse in leadership. His unwavering commitment to human rights and democracy has left an indelible mark on Philippine legislative history. As we reflect on his legacy, we are reminded that true leaders inspire others to continue their work, ensuring that their impact endures for generations to come.

Key Takeaways

Rep. Edcel Lagman's necrological service was held at the House of Representatives
He was remembered as a man of unwavering integrity and conviction
His legislative achievements included landmark laws on human rights and reproductive health
Family members and colleagues praised his wit, candor, wisdom, and eloquence
Lagman's legacy serves as a testament to the importance of finesse in leadership

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