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Comelec Exceeds Printing Target 1.8 Million Ballots Printed Daily

The Commission on Elections (Comelec) has achieved a significant milestone by printing an impressive 1.8 million ballots per day as of February 3, exceeding its initial target of 1.5 million. This notable progress comes after a nearly three-week delay to accommodate the Supreme Court's directive.

Chairman George Erwin Garcia expressed confidence that Comelec will meet its April 14 deadline for completing both printing and verification processes. To expedite the process, Comelec is utilizing six high-speed printing machines, comprising four from the National Printing Office (NPO) and two from Miru Systems of South Korea.

With the printing process now largely complete, attention shifts to manual and machine verification. The commission plans to hire an additional 250-300 verifiers to augment its existing team of 800, ensuring that each printed ballot meets quality and specifications compliance standards.

Notably, Comelec has already completed printing ballots for several priority regions, including those in the Bangsamoro Autonomous Region in Muslim Mindanao (BARMM) and Regions 4 (Calabarzon and Mimaropa) and 5 (Bicol).

Machine verification will play a crucial role in the process. To accommodate this, Comelec is considering renting facilities at the National Irrigation Authority (NIA) or Amoranto Stadium to facilitate manual verification and utilize its 500 automated counting machines for ballot verification.

In this article, we'll explore the importance of timely printing and verification processes in ensuring a successful election.

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