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Yoon Back in Court Last Chance at Impeachment Trial

South Korea's ousted President Yoon Seok Yeol will face his final impeachment hearing, where the Constitutional Court will deliberate on whether to formally remove him from office. Despite the outcome of the trial, Yoon has remained steadfast in his defiance, attributing his failed martial law bid to a malicious opposition.

A Turbulent Path to Impeachment

Yoon's attempt to impose martial law in December was met with swift rejection by the opposition-led parliament after just six hours. He was subsequently impeached for attempting to suspend civilian rule. Throughout the hearings, Yoon has remained unapologetic, even suggesting that ordering the arrest of MPs would not have violated the constitution if it had been carried out.

Evidence and Deliberation

The upcoming hearing on Thursday will feature testimony from the former chief of South Korea's intelligence service and one of the heads of Seoul's Capital Defense Command. The military unit was dispatched to the parliament during Yoon's short-lived martial law bid. It is widely anticipated that this will be Yoon's last opportunity to present his case before the court's judges retire to deliberate on whether to uphold his impeachment.

Unanimous Ruling Expected

Many legal scholars and experts concur that a unanimous ruling in favor of impeachment is likely to be made by the Constitutional Court judges. However, they also caution that political maneuvering could stall the trial, with prominent conservative supporters of Yoon calling for additional hearings to be held. The possibility of an additional judge being approved for the court's nine-member bench has also been raised.

Constitutional Crisis Unfolds

The majority of Yoon's impeachment trial has centered on the question of whether he violated the constitution by declaring martial law, which is reserved for national emergencies or times of war. If impeached, Yoon will face a criminal trial on insurrection charges, carrying a prison sentence or the death penalty.

What Lies Ahead?

If the court upholds the impeachment, an election must be held within 60 days to choose a new president. This development marks a significant turning point in South Korean politics as the country navigates a constitutional crisis.

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