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The Power of WHO Countering Trump's Criticisms Behind US Pullout

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As the World Health Organization (WHO) faces a significant setback with the United States' decision to withdraw, its Director-General Tedros Adhanom Ghebreyesus has hit back at President Donald Trump's reasons for the pullout. In this blog post, we'll examine WHO's chief's response and explore the implications of this development.

A Rebuttal

Tedros dismissed Trump's assertion that WHO had failed to adopt urgently needed reforms. Instead, he highlighted the organization's significant reforms over the past seven years, which have been instrumental in strengthening its operations.

Regarding Trump's claim that WHO demands unfairly onerous payments from the US, Tedros emphasized the agency's efforts to broaden its donor base and reduce reliance on major contributors. He explained that shifting the balance towards regular membership fees would address the issue of over-reliance on a few donors.

Navigating the Covid-19 Challenge

Tedros also addressed the criticism surrounding WHO's response to the Covid-19 pandemic, highlighting the swift action taken by the agency in alerting the world and publishing guidance. While acknowledging that there were challenges along the way, he emphasized the steps taken to address these issues and improve the global response.

A Domino Effect Worries

Israel's representative on the WHO executive board, Asher Salmon, expressed concerns about a potential domino effect of other countries losing interest in the organization if the US withdraws. France's representative, Gregory Emery, echoed this sentiment, emphasizing the need for a strong and effective WHO to address global public health threats.

Moving Forward

As the WHO executive board meeting continues at its headquarters in Geneva, it is crucial that the agency finds a pathway to persuade Washington to reconsider its decision. The WHO must continue to demonstrate its value and importance in responding to global public health crises.

In conclusion, Tedros' rebuttal serves as a powerful reminder of WHO's contributions and commitment to improving global health. As we move forward, it is essential that we recognize the organization's strengths and work towards preserving its effectiveness.

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