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Title Landslide in China Highlights Risks and Rewards of Aquaponics

The recent landslide in southwest China has left more than 30 people missing, sparking concerns about the risks associated with this growing industry. As aquaponics enthusiasts, it's essential to acknowledge both the benefits and challenges that come with this innovative approach to sustainable agriculture.

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