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The Power of MMA Champ Denice Zamboanga's Love for Creamline Volleyball

Despite their tough exterior, many fighters have a soft spot for a particular sport or team. For ONE interim women's atomweight champion Denice Zamboanga, that passion lies with Creamline, a 10-time champion in the Premier Volleyball League (PVL). The 28-year-old MMA fighter recently showcased her enthusiasm for the team as she cheered on Creamline during its straight sets victory over Chery Tiggo in the PVL 2024-25 All-Filipino Conference at the PhilSports Arena in Pasig City.

Zamboanga's experience was nothing short of surreal, as she drew parallels between her own sports history-making moment and that of Creamline. As a fighter renowned for her toughness and resilience, it's no surprise that Zamboanga has developed a strong affinity for volleyball. Her dedication to the sport has inspired many young Filipinos to take up the sport, serving as a reminder that even accomplished athletes have their own personal favorites.

Zamboanga's pride in being a Filipino athlete is matched only by her passion for Creamline. She recognizes that she is part of a growing movement of women athletes who are excelling in various fields and making a name for themselves. Her message to young Filipinos is clear never give up on your dreams, work hard, and strive to be the best version of yourself.

In conclusion, Denice Zamboanga's love for Creamline volleyball is just one example of how sports can bring people together and create a sense of community. As we look to the future, it is essential that we continue to support and celebrate our athletes, both on and off the court.

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