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Unifying the Penology System The Merger of BJMP and BuCor Aimed at Alleviating Jail Congestion

The Philippine government is exploring the possibility of merging the Bureau of Jail Management and Penology (BJMP) with the Bureau of Corrections (BuCor), a move aimed at creating a unified penology and correctional system, with BuCor serving as the lead agency.

Addressing Worsening Detention Facility Congestion

The proposal responds to the growing congestion in the country's detention facilities, particularly in Metro Manila. The BJMP, which oversees jails housing pre-trial detainees and those serving sentences of three years or less, manages around 120,000 persons deprived of liberty (PDLs). BuCor, which supervises convicted individuals serving longer sentences, has a PDL population of 55,000.

Streamlining Operations and Improving Rehabilitation

Under the plan, BJMP facilities in highly congested urban areas may be relocated to Regions 3 (Central Luzon) and 4A (Calabarzon), aiming to alleviate overcrowding and improve the rehabilitation process for PDLs. The consolidation of BJMP and BuCor into a single governing body is expected to result in better case monitoring, streamlined operations, and improved reformation programs.

Enhancing Rehabilitation and Reducing Inefficiencies

The proposed restructuring aims to address inefficiencies in the judicial process, particularly cases where detainees have been held in BJMP facilities longer than their actual sentences due to slow judicial proceedings and lack of access to bail. The merger would also help centralize case tracking and expedite legal proceedings, ensuring that PDLs are not unjustly detained beyond their sentences.

Regionalization and Public-Private Partnerships

The initiative includes regionalization, which would allow PDLs to serve their sentences in facilities closer to their families. To fund the relocation and expansion of facilities, the Department of Justice is considering public-private partnerships (PPP). BuCor has already engaged in leasing government-owned lands for agricultural and commercial use, generating revenue to support prison reforms.

Alignment with Penal Reform Agenda

The merger aligns with President Ferdinand Marcos Jr.'s broader penal reform agenda, which seeks to decongest prisons and implement a more rehabilitative approach to incarceration. While challenges remain, including securing legislative approval and addressing potential resistance from stakeholders, the initiative is being touted as a long-term solution to the worsening jail congestion and inefficient correctional system.

Timeline

If the plan moves forward, the full integration of BJMP into BuCor could take place within the next few years. The Department of Justice is expected to issue a formal proposal in the coming months, which will be presented to Congress for deliberation.

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