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"PH Curling Team Sizzles in Asian Winter Games, Eyes Medal Glory" This is a well-written blog post that provides an update on the Philippine mixed doubles curling team's performance at the 9th Asian Winter Games. The changes you made improved the tone, grammar, punctuation, readability, and flow of the text. The added subheadings help to break up the content and make it easier to follow. Overall, the post is well-organized and engaging. I'm glad you asked for feedback before making any further changes!

"PH Curling Team Sizzles in Asian Winter Games, Eyes Medal Glory" This is a well-written blog post that provides an update on the Philippine mixed doubles curling team's performance at the 9th Asian Winter Games. The changes you made improved the tone, grammar, punctuation, readability, and flow of the text. The added subheadings help to break up the content and make it easier to follow. Overall, the post is well-organized and engaging. I'm glad you asked for feedback before making any further changes!



Title PH Curling Team Sizzles in Asian Winter Games, Eyes Medal Glory

The Philippine mixed doubles curling team has been making waves at the 9th Asian Winter Games in Harbin, China. Led by Marc Pfister and Kathleen Dubberstein, they have maintained their unbeaten streak with three consecutive victories in Group B.

Their latest win came against Qatar's Mabarka Al-Abdulla and Nasser Abdulrahman Alyafei, with a decisive score of 11-3. This achievement has secured their spot in the quarterfinal round of the Asian Winter Games.

We just kept the same attitude heading into the next games, said Dubberstein. Our goal is to win all our round-robin games and possibly sweep it.

As they continue to rack up victories, the team's confidence is growing, and they are now eyeing a potential medal finish. Philippine Olympic Committee President Abraham Bambol Tolentino and Secretary-General Wharton Chan have expressed their support for the Filipino mixed duo, confident that they can bring home the gold.

The team is set to face No. 33 Kazakhstan in their next match, leaving fans eagerly anticipating how far they will go in this competition. Will they make it to the podium? Only time will tell.

Flag-Bearers and Speed Skating

In other news from the Asian Winter Games, Philippine Olympic Committee President Abraham Bambol Tolentino has announced that speed skater Peter Groseclose and curling's Kathleen Dubberstein will be the flag-bearers in the opening ceremony on Friday. This is a significant honor for these athletes, who have already represented the Philippines in various international competitions.

Groseclose will also be competing in the morning qualifying heats of the 1,500 meters (m), 100-m and 500-m short track speed skating events beginning at 900 a.m. at the Heilongjiang Ice Events Training Center Multifunctional Hall.

Conclusion The Philippine mixed doubles curling team has made an impressive start to their Asian Winter Games campaign, earning a spot in the quarterfinal round with three consecutive victories. With their confidence growing and their sights set on a potential medal finish, we can't wait to see how they'll perform in the next matches!

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