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Sea Once a Blessing for Pakistani City, Now a Curse The Devastating Impacts of Climate Change

As the world grapples with the far-reaching consequences of climate change, one Pakistani city stands out as a poignant example of how this global phenomenon can have devastating local impacts. Gwadar, a coastal city in Balochistan province, was once a thriving fishing and tourism hub, but today it faces an existential threat from rising sea levels, more frequent and intense weather events, and unsustainable land use practices.

Decade of Extreme Weather

In February last year, Gwadar experienced 30 consecutive hours of torrential rain, washing out roads, bridges, and communication lines. The city's low elevation and porous soil make it particularly vulnerable to flooding. It's no less than an island nation situation, warns hydrologist Pazeer Ahmed. Many low-lying areas in the town will be partially or completely submerged if the sea level continues to rise.

The Sea, Once a Blessing, Now a Curse

Gwadar's reliance on the Arabian Sea for fishing and tourism has become its biggest liability. Warmer ocean temperatures mean bigger and more powerful waves, which whip up higher due to summer monsoon winds. The consequences are dire hundreds of homes have been washed away, and the city's beaches have disappeared.

Melting Glaciers and Rising Sea Levels

The melting of glaciers contributes to rising sea levels, exacerbating coastal erosion. According to data from the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA), Karachi's sea level has risen almost 8 inches between 1916 and 2016, with a projected increase of another half-inch by 2040.

Community Struggles

The fishing community is particularly affected, with smaller catches, disappearing native fish species, and changed migration patterns. The invasion of unwanted marine species like pufferfish adds to the woes. Illegal fishing and foreign trawlers are also taking their toll on Gwadar's once-thriving fishing industry.

Agricultural Decline

What agriculture there was in Gwadar's surrounding areas is vanishing due to loss of farmland and livestock deaths, according to locals. This trend mirrors a broader pattern across Pakistan, where farmers are experiencing declining crop yields and increasing crop diseases due to climate extremes, particularly floods, droughts, and heat waves, as reported by the United Nations' Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC).

Challenges and Solutions

To mitigate these challenges, authorities have built seawalls from stone or concrete to hold back saltwater intrusion. However, this is a small solution to a massive problem. Gwadar's people and businesses are fighting climate change on different fronts, including land use changes and unauthorized construction, which worsen flooding.

Innovations and Initiatives

To address the issue of unsustainable land use practices, officials are promoting eco-friendly infrastructure development, such as green buildings and sustainable drainage systems. Moreover, initiatives like the China-Pakistan Economic Corridor (CPEC) aim to create a more resilient Gwadar by investing in deep-sea ports, international airports, expressways, and other critical infrastructure.

Conclusion

Gwadar's story serves as a stark reminder of the devastating impacts of climate change on vulnerable communities. As we navigate this global challenge, it is essential that we prioritize innovation, adaptation, and resilience-building measures to protect the lives and livelihoods of Gwadar's people. With finesse and foresight, we can create a more sustainable future for this Pakistani city.

References

1. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA). (2016). Sea Level Rise.
2. United Nations Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC). (2020). Climate Change 2020 Impacts, Vulnerability, and Adaptation.
3. World Wildlife Fund (WWF). (2020). Pakistan Country Profile.

Keywords Gwadar, climate change, sea level rise, flooding, sustainable land use, eco-friendly infrastructure, resilience-building, China-Pakistan Economic Corridor (CPEC), United Nations Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC).

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