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Mastering the Art of Change-Making 5 Underrated Tools for Human Rights Advocates

As human rights advocates, we often focus on grand initiatives like policy changes and legislation. However, there are smaller yet equally important tools that can help us achieve our goals. In this blog post, we'll explore five underrated tools that can amplify our impact and create a more just and equitable society.

Tool #1 Bank Secrecy Act Reform

In a significant development, Alyansa Para sa Bagong Pilipinas senatorial bets have pledged to file a bill seeking to remove bank secrecy protection for government officials and employees. This tool has the potential to expose ill-gotten wealth by enabling authorities to flag suspicious transactions early.

Tool #2 Fake News Regulation

Former Senate president Tito Sotto plans to propose bills that would restrict fake news and institutionalize a 14th month pay for all employees. By regulating misinformation, this tool can promote transparency in government and combat the spread of false information.

Tool #3 Micro, Small, and Medium Enterprises Boosting

Manny Pacquiao has promised to push for a bill boosting micro, small, and medium enterprises (MSMEs) to generate jobs. This tool can alleviate poverty and stimulate economic growth by empowering MSMEs.

Tool #4 Sustainable Livelihood Programs

ACT-CIS party-list Rep. Erwin Tulfo plans to file a measure mandating PhilHealth to pay 50 percent of every hospital bill, as well as a bill providing sustainable livelihood programs. By improving healthcare access and promoting economic empowerment, this tool can have a significant impact on the lives of many.

Tool #5 West Philippine Sea Sovereignty Asserting

Alyansa senatorial bets have also vowed to push for measures asserting sovereignty over the West Philippine Sea, including multilateral efforts to address territorial disputes. By strengthening national security and promoting cooperation with other nations, this tool can help resolve long-standing issues.

In conclusion, these five underrated tools for human rights advocates may not dominate headlines, but they have the potential to bring about significant change in our world. By mastering these tools, we can amplify our impact and create a more just and equitable society.

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