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The Power of Southwoods Leading the Charge in PAL Interclub Championship Division

The Philippine Airlines (PAL) Interclub is one of the most prestigious golf tournaments in the country, bringing together top teams from all over the Philippines. This year's edition promises to be an exciting one, with Manila Southwoods leading the charge in the championship division.

A Dominant Force

Southwoods has been a dominant force in Philippine golf for years, claiming six of the last seven titles and establishing itself as the team to beat. With their impressive record, it's no surprise that they're favored to win again this year. Eastridge Golf Club, however, is looking to replicate its victory over Southwoods in the Fil-Am Invitational last December, making for an intriguing matchup.

The Rest of the Field

Rounding out the cast of contenders are Del Monte, winner of last week's seniors' tournament, and Tagaytay Highlands-Team IMG. Each team can have up to eight players, but only four can compete in each round, adding an extra layer of strategy to the game.

The Rules

Players are limited to a maximum of two rounds, with the tournament following the PAL scoring system 1 point for a bogey, 2 for a par, 3 for a birdie, 4 for an eagle, 5 for a hole-in-one, and 6 for a double eagle.

The Venues

The tournament will be held at two venues Negros Occidental Golf and Country Club and Bacolod Golf Club. With the best teams in the country vying for the top spot, this year's PAL Interclub is shaping up to be an unforgettable event.

Sponsors

This year's 76th staging of the PAL Interclub is supported by Platinum sponsors PRIMAX Broadcasting Network and Asian Journal, as well as gold sponsor Mastercard. Other sponsors include RMN (silver), ABS-CBN Global (bronze), VISA, Philippine National Bank, SM Bacolod, Tanduay, Asia Brewery, and Citadines (hotel partner).

The Teams

Here's a list of teams in each classification

Championship Manila Southwoods, Eastridge, Del Monte, Tagaytay Highlands-Team IMG
Founders Negros Occidental, Riviera, Forest Hills, Valley, Cebu Country Club, Canlubang, Alabang, Pueblo de Oro, The Orchard, Rancho Palos Verdes, Team Brookside, Wack Wack, Bacolod, Apo, FilAm Fairway, Fairways and Bluewater Boracay, Sherwood Hills, Zamboanga, Tagaytay Midlands-Team IMG, MSU, Brittannika Team 1, Villamor, Golf and Country Club of Iligan, FilAm LA 1
Aviator Tagaytay Country Club Lucky 9-Team IMG, Southern California Red Hawk, FilAm Fairfield, Eagleridge, Alta Vista, Club Filipino de Cebu, Ambagan, Negros International, Summit Point, Norcal FilAm, Veterans, Camp Aguinaldo, Negros Occidental Team 2, Davao City, Dona Pepita, South Cotabato, Guinhalaran, Baguio Country Club, Iloilo, Lumbia, Lagitek International, UP Teejots, San Juanico, Illana Bay GCC-FTB, South Pacific, FilAm LA 2
Sports Writers Filipino Golfers in the Middle East-Dubai, Apo Team B, Pilipino Golf Association of British Columbia, Greenhills West, Yokohama Eagles, West Highlands Golf Club, Brittannika Team 2, Seattle, Sarangani, Liloan, Green Tee Club Riyadh, Lanang, Camp Evangelista, Paraiso Golf Players Association, Pearl Kai Hawaii, Club Filipino de Cebu, Ambagan, Negros International, Summit Point, Norcal FilAm, Veterans, Camp Aguinaldo, Negros Occidental Team 2, Davao City, Dona Pepita, South Cotabato, Guinhalaran, Baguio Country Club, Iloilo, Lumbia, Lagitek International, UP Teejots, San Juanico, Illana Bay GCC-FTB, South Pacific, FilAm LA 2
Influencing Success

The power of Southwoods lies not just in their individual skills but also in their ability to work together as a cohesive unit. By fostering a sense of camaraderie and teamwork, they've been able to achieve remarkable success on the golf course.

Conclusion

The PAL Interclub is always an exciting event, but with Southwoods leading the charge in the championship division, this year's tournament promises to be especially memorable. With their impressive record and talented lineup, they're poised to make a strong statement on the golf course. As we watch them take on the rest of the field, it'll be fascinating to see how they pertain their winning ways and bring home another title.

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