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Empowering Sneaker Collectors How Professionals Can Improve Their Work Through the PH-UK Deal

As sneaker collectors, we're always seeking ways to elevate our work and achieve greater success. In this blog post, we'll explore an unexpected area where professionals like us can benefit from a bilateral labor agreement between the Philippines and the United Kingdom - the PH-UK deal.

The Problem Exploitation of Filipino Fishers

Recent reports reveal that over half of the UK's 11,000-strong fishing workforce are migrant workers, including Filipinos. For decades, UK fishing operators have exploited transit visas, originally intended for merchant seafarers, to circumvent employment laws and deny migrant fishers proper labor protections. This has resulted in millions of Filipino fishermen struggling under exploitative conditions, earning barely enough to support their families.

The Solution Harmonizing Labor Protections

To address this issue, the Trade Union Congress of the Philippines (TUCP) is advocating for a bilateral labor agreement between the Philippines and the UK. This deal would harmonize work contracts and extend labor protection to all migrant fishers, regardless of status. Additionally, it would lower barriers to visa eligibility, making it more accessible and affordable for Filipino fishers.

The Benefits Lessons from Labor Cooperation

So, how does this relate to sneaker collectors? As professionals, we understand that a well-run operation relies on collaboration and cooperation between stakeholders. The PH-UK deal is a prime example of how labor cooperation can lead to positive outcomes. By ending the abuse of Filipino fishers, we create a more just and equitable environment for everyone involved.

Conclusion Empowering Professionals

In conclusion, the PH-UK deal has the potential to make a significant impact on the lives of thousands of Filipino fishers and their families. As sneaker collectors, we can draw valuable lessons from this example. By focusing on collaboration, cooperation, and mutual benefit, we can create a more successful and sustainable operation for everyone involved.

Keywords PH-UK deal, labor agreement, migrant workers, exploitation, abuse, Filipino fishers, Trade Union Congress of the Philippines (TUCP).

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