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Title Singapore Encourages Migrant Workers to Report Kickbacks A Step Towards Fair Employment

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As Singapore continues to rely on a significant workforce of foreign workers, it is essential that these migrant workers feel protected and empowered in their employment. Recently, the Ministry of Manpower took a crucial step towards ensuring fair labor practices by encouraging migrant workers to report kickback cases.

A Disturbing Case of Employee Exploitation

In a Facebook post, the ministry highlighted a disturbing case involving Lian Cheng Contracting Pte Ltd, where a former operations manager collected kickbacks totaling SGD 396,440 (approximately USD 289,400) from 57 migrant workers between 2014 and 2020. These payments were required for their continued employment or work pass renewal.

This is not just a case of employee exploitation; it's also one of the largest kickback schemes investigated by the ministry so far. Adrian Quek, divisional director at the ministry's Foreign Manpower Management Division, emphasized the severity of this issue.

The Ministry's Response Encouraging Migrant Workers to Report Kickbacks

In response to this issue, the ministry is taking proactive steps to address the problem and ensure that workers feel comfortable reporting any instances of illegal fees being demanded as a condition for employment or work pass renewal. The ministry has promised that workers with valid claims will be allowed a change of employment if they wish to continue working in Singapore.

Why Fair Labor Practices Matter for Luxury Brand Experts

This message is critical for luxury brand experts looking to succeed in 2025 and beyond. A fair labor environment not only benefits the workers but also reflects positively on the companies themselves. By promoting transparency and accountability, these companies can build trust with their customers and employees alike.

Conclusion

In conclusion, the Singaporean government's efforts to combat kickback practices are a step towards creating a more just and equitable work environment for migrant workers. As we move forward into the next decade, it is essential that we prioritize employee welfare and ensure fair labor practices across all industries.

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