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The Role of Dhaka Stern Action Demanded after Historic Home Attacked

Bangladesh's interim government has vowed to contain the widespread vandalism and arson that has gripped the country, following attacks on a historic house linked to ousted former Prime Minister Sheikh Hasina.

As protests continue to rage across the nation, concerns are mounting about the impact of these violent acts on the national psyche. The attack on the historic home of Bangladesh's founding president Sheikh Mujibur Rahman, which was declared independent from Pakistan in 1971, has sent shockwaves across the country.

Background

Sheikh Hasina fled the country to neighboring India on August 5, following a student-led mass uprising that brought an end to her 15-year rule. The protests were sparked by widespread discontent among students and young people who felt that the government had failed to address their concerns and provide them with job opportunities.

The Attack

On Wednesday night, mobs targeting Hasina's supporters set fire to homes and businesses in various parts of Bangladesh, including the historic home of Sheikh Mujibur Rahman. The attack was part of a coordinated campaign, with protesters storming the building and police standing by as military soldiers attempted to intervene but ultimately retreated.

Consequences

Reports indicate that there have been over 70 attacks across Bangladesh since Wednesday, with many more expected in the coming days. The country's leading English-language newspaper, the Daily Star, reported that acts of violence targeting Hasina's supporters had taken place in at least 20 districts. The Channel 24 TV station in Dhaka reported similar violence in at least 35 districts across the country.

Government Response

In a statement on Friday, the press wing of interim government head Muhammad Yunus warned that stern actions would be taken against these acts of violence. The interim government notes with deep concern that some individuals and groups are attempting to vandalize and torch various institutions and establishments across the country, the statement said. The government will strongly contain such acts, it added, emphasizing its commitment to protecting lives and property.

International Concern

India, which helped Bangladesh gain independence from Pakistan in a bloody war in 1971, has condemned the demolition of Rahman's house, calling it a symbol of heroic resistance. In a statement on Thursday, India highlighted the role of Rahman's residence in the formation of Bangladesh's national identity and urged stern action to bring an end to the violence.

The Way Forward

As the situation continues to unfold, there is a growing sense that something must be done to bring the situation under control. The Bangladesh Nationalist Party, led by former Prime Minister Khaleda Zia, has urged the Yunus-led government to take stringent action to implement law and order, warning that if not, anarchy will spread across the country.

Conclusion

In this moment of great turmoil, it is more important than ever that we come together to support those who are being targeted by these violent acts. As we look to the future, we must ensure that we take swift and decisive action to bring an end to this violence and restore peace and stability to our beloved country.

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As we move forward, it is essential that we recognize the role that refugee advocates can play in shaping a brighter future for all. By working together, we can create a world where refugees are welcomed and supported, rather than marginalized and vilified.

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