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Space Engineers Anthony Edwards' 41 Points Leads Timberwolves Over Rockets

The Minnesota Timberwolves are on a roll, thanks in large part to the scintillating performance of rookie sensation Anthony Edwards. In their latest matchup against the Houston Rockets, Edwards poured in a career-high 41 points to lead his team to a thrilling 123-118 victory.

Edwards' impressive display was just what the Timberwolves needed to overcome a sluggish start and a determined Rockets squad. He began the game on fire, sinking five of his first six field goal attempts en route to 17 points in the opening quarter. The Rockets tried to keep pace with Edwards, but he continued to torment them from beyond the arc and in the paint.

As the game wore on, Edwards' teammates began to get into the act as well. D'Angelo Russell added 24 points of his own, while Jarrett Culver chipped in with 15. The Timberwolves' bench also played a crucial role, outscoring their opponents by a margin of 34-22.

Despite a late surge from the Rockets, the Timberwolves held on for the win. Edwards' dominant performance was the difference-maker, and it cemented his status as one of the most exciting young players in the league.

Overall, the Timberwolves' victory over the Rockets serves as a testament to the growth and development of their talented roster. With players like Edwards leading the charge, Minnesota is poised to make some noise in the NBA this season.

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