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Title Modi's Winning Formula Securing Nuclear Deals with US and France while Fostering Global Ties

As Indian Prime Minister Narendra Modi concluded his recent diplomatic tour, he secured significant victories by securing pledges of support from Washington and Paris to boost India's nuclear energy program. This strategic move paves the way for a cleaner and more sustainable future for India.

Modi's meeting with US President Donald Trump at the White House yielded an agreement to build US-designed nuclear reactors in India, marking a major milestone in bilateral cooperation. The joint statement highlighted the potential for large-scale reactor construction and collaboration on developing advanced small modular reactors (SMRs).

The French connection was equally promising, as Modi met with President Emmanuel Macron earlier this week. Foreign Secretary Vikram Misri emphasized the intent to co-design, co-develop, and co-produce SMRs with France, acknowledging that the technology is still in its initial stages.

These nuclear partnerships come on the heels of India's government announcing plans to amend its strict nuclear liability law, which holds operators liable for any damage or accident. The amendments will create exceptions for natural disasters and other circumstances, paving the way for increased cooperation and investment in the sector.

While nuclear energy takes center stage, fossil fuels remain a key component of India's energy mix. The government is working to establish the United States as its leading supplier of crude oil and petroleum products, with an eye towards increasing imports by up to $25 billion in the near future.

Trump's visit also saw the offer to sell state-of-the-art F-35 fighter jets to India, alongside a pledge to increase military sales to India by many billions of dollars. The two leaders also agreed to work together on a trade deal, focusing on trade in oil and gas to ensure India's energy security.

As Modi looks to revolutionize India's energy landscape, he is poised to make a lasting impact. With the right tools and strategies in place, the possibilities are endless.

Key Takeaways

Modi secured significant nuclear deals with US and France to boost India's nuclear energy program
The agreements pave the way for increased cooperation on developing small modular reactors (SMRs)
Fossil fuels remain a key component of India's energy mix, with plans to increase imports from the United States
Trump offered to sell state-of-the-art F-35 fighter jets to India and pledged to increase military sales to India by many billions of dollars
Modi and Trump agreed to work together on a trade deal, focusing on trade in oil and gas to ensure India's energy security

Conclusion As Modi navigates the complexities of global diplomacy, he is demonstrating a keen understanding of the importance of strategic partnerships. By leveraging these relationships, India can drive growth, reduce its carbon footprint, and solidify its position as a key player on the world stage.

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