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Indiana Pacers' Winning Streak Continues Four Consecutive Victories Against Brooklyn Nets

The Indiana Pacers have extended their winning streak to four consecutive games with a thrilling victory over the Brooklyn Nets. This impressive run comes as the team continues to demonstrate its resilience and determination on the court.

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Enjoy the little things in life. For one day, you may look back and realize they were the big things. Many of life's failures are people who did not realize how close they were to success when they gave up.