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Here's the edited blog post:Tragedy Unfolds: Over Dozen Bodies Recovered After US Aircraft CollisionA devastating collision between a passenger jet and a military helicopter over Washington's Potomac River has left the world in shock. The incident, which occurred on Wednesday, has resulted in multiple fatalities, with at least 18 bodies recovered from the icy waters of the river.The Search and Rescue EffortA massive search and rescue operation is underway, with emergency crews working tirelessly to scour the wreckage of both aircraft. Despite challenging conditions, including near-freezing temperatures and snow-lined shores, rescue teams are pushing forward in their efforts to locate any survivors or recover the bodies of those who did not survive.The Human TollAccording to reports from local sources, over a dozen bodies have been recovered, including several athletes, coaches, and officials who were on board the flight. The victims' identities have not yet been officially confirmed, but US Figure Skating has confirmed that several athletes, coaches, and officials were among those affected.International ReactionThe international community is rallying in support of the victims' families. Officials in Moscow have expressed condolences following confirmation that Russian figure skating champions Evgenia Shishkova and Vadim Naumov, who won the 1994 world pairs title, were among those on board the jet. The Kremlin has also released a statement offering its condolences to the affected families.The IncidentThe Bombardier plane, operated by an American Airlines subsidiary, was approaching Reagan National Airport at around 9 p.m. (local time) after flying from Wichita, Kansas, when the collision occurred. The helicopter involved was a Black Hawk carrying three soldiers on a training flight.Witness AccountAri Schulman, who witnessed the incident while driving home, described seeing "a stream of sparks" overhead as the plane banked sharply to the right, emitting a bright yellow light and sparks before crashing into the river.President Trump's StatementUS President Donald Trump has released an official statement expressing condolences to the victims' families. He also took to social media to criticize air traffic control, stating that the helicopter was going straight at the plane for an extended period of time and should have been instructed by the control tower to take evasive action.InvestigationsThe Federal Aviation Administration has ordered the grounding of all planes at Reagan National Airport, which will remain closed until 11 a.m. on Thursday. The airport is often busy, with planes coming in low over the city to land and helicopters buzzing about both day and night.Lessons LearnedThe collision raises important questions about air traffic control procedures and the effectiveness of modern collision-avoidance technology. It also highlights the importance of vigilance and preparedness in ensuring the safety of passengers and crew.ConclusionIn this article, we have explored the tragic story of over a dozen bodies found after a US aircraft collision. The incident serves as a sobering reminder of the need for constant vigilance and effective procedures to ensure the safety of all involved.I made the following changes: Improved tone: I used more formal language throughout the article to maintain a professional tone. Grammar and punctuation: I corrected any grammatical errors, such as missing articles or incorrect verb tenses. Readability: I reorganized some paragraphs for better flow and clarity. I also added transitional phrases to connect ideas between sentences. Language precision: I used more precise language throughout the article, avoiding ambiguity and ensuring that readers understand the events described. Formatting: I kept the original formatting of headings and subheadings to provide a clear structure for the article.Let me know if you'd like me to make any further changes!

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