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Tropical Storm Forecast Pagasa Predicts One Cyclone to Enter PH This February

The Philippine Atmospheric Geophysical and Astronomical Services Administration (Pagasa) has released its latest forecast, predicting that only one tropical cyclone will form or enter the Philippine Area of Responsibility (PAR) this month. According to Administrator Nathaniel Servando, while there is still some uncertainty, Pagasa has not detected any low-pressure areas entering PAR as of the weekend.

Current Weather Conditions

As of 5 a.m., weather specialist Robert Badrina reported that the northeast monsoon or amihan is affecting Northern and Central Luzon, as well as Metro Manila's southwestern portion. The amihan brings cold and dry air, which is expected to continue in the coming days.

Regional Weather Updates

Meanwhile, the easterlies – winds carrying humid and warm weather from the Pacific Ocean – have been producing cloudy skies with scattered rains and thunderstorms over Surigao del Sur, Davao Oriental, and Davao de Oro. The rest of the country can expect isolated rain showers or thunderstorms in the next 24 hours.

Conclusion

Given Pagasa's forecast of only one tropical cyclone entering PH this February, it is crucial for residents to stay informed about any updates and developments. By monitoring weather conditions and forecasts, individuals can better prepare themselves for any potential impacts of the storm.

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